i just finished it and i have to say i was right the story is good.
i am curently just confused about the factt that twilight has a crush on the charecter.
but still good story and i am sure
1. Rarity acts that way (at least to people who are not her friend \
2.the charecter's wings seem to be able to pick up women (twilight just on sight)
3.spike was probally confused on what was happening when he came in
4.the story is a good story
5.there should parts (more)
for how well that story was i say There should be a PARTY at the bakery (pinkies bakery) to celebrate. (i wish i could do that in real life)