Fic I'm making (will include mild shipping)

Last edited by Phxntxm on Mon Jan 30, 2012 8:23 am; edited 2 times in total

I can keep you safe, I can keep you happy.

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DJ Col-7 wrote:: (... Your link is a blank doc)

Awesome!

I need to figure out how to link Google docs then.

Alright I fixed it, and updated with the second chapter I wrote. After submitting it, I have 3 people that follow me now, one who favorited the story, 19 who are tracking it, and a 4.1/5 star rating from 5 different ratings. All in 7 hours Very Happy

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The link doesn't work! Sad

I just checked it from my other computer and it does...if it doesn't work just go to http://www.fimfiction.com and search Phxntxm

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It worked! My computer was just being funky.

Thats awesome phxntxm keep it up!

Thanks! I'm surprised I've gotten such good feedback, even on the site I posted it on too Very Happy

this is the first time I've ever tried to write for fun before. I'm pretty excited about getting good feedback Very Happy

however....I need an editor....l just want to make sure it's the best I can make it.

I've just updated it with Chapter 3...and btw...it got pretty dark, I blame Faust Razz

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I edited the first chapter. Hope you like it. Smile

Subject: nice story Thu Feb 02, 2012 2:08 am

it is a nice story when it comes down to internet storys and it can even hold its own agianst some storys in the real world but dont be cheering just yet i have only read chapter 1...

Discover of Truths wrote:: it is a nice story when it comes down to internet storys and it can even hold its own agianst some storys in the real world but dont be cheering just yet i have only read chapter 1...

lmao I consider that my crappy chapter, I did so much better the next two Razz

Subject: done and MORE MORE!!!!!! Fri Feb 03, 2012 5:21 pm

simaler to the crimson story from DJ it keeped me hooked throughout chapter 2 and 3 the "scary" parts didnt quite scare me thugh then again that is probally from cupcakes *shuders* well anyway great story so far!!!!

cheers

Chapter 4 finally completed

Chapter 5 done...one more left xD

Done, sequel time? Yes I think so.