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PostSubject: Crimson: The First Days of Nightmare   Thu Feb 02, 2012 10:25 pm

At long last I have posted the first chapter of my fic I have compiled across the last few months. If you have not read it, I recommend you read threw it. Warning, a few mature elements.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/9216/Crimson%3A-The-First-Days-of-Nightmare
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PostSubject: Re: Crimson: The First Days of Nightmare   Thu Feb 02, 2012 10:57 pm

Very Happy Wow that was really awesome story!

You still updating it?
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PostSubject: Re: Crimson: The First Days of Nightmare   Fri Feb 03, 2012 2:04 am

When I get the time... Sorta unmotivated now though seeing as I am not getting the amount of views I was hoping for. Sad
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PostSubject: LOOK LOOK LOOK   Fri Feb 03, 2012 4:46 am

you have 50 views plus i just viewed it.

*dramatic wait*

*gives thumbs up @ *

nice story

how many views do you get of the story itself?

the story actually has me hooked and i only got close to half way done so you have the all important "hook" aspect of a story if it is long whether or not it can keep the person reading on...

this story sure has that.

plus the charecter is interesting and at least you got how the charecters (from the show) right. which is a good thing. (so far anyway i have ony read around half)
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PostSubject: Re: Crimson: The First Days of Nightmare   Fri Feb 03, 2012 4:49 am

Yeah but the thing is I posted mine with the same rating, same tags, but 2 chapters. And I got 800 views in a few hours, and I've almost hit 2k. So we can't figure out why his didn't get many
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PostSubject: nice story   Fri Feb 03, 2012 5:16 am

i just finished it and i have to say i was right the story is good.

i am curently just confused about the factt that twilight has a crush on the charecter. Question

but still good story and i am sure

1. Rarity acts that way (at least to people who are not her friend \

2.the charecter's wings seem to be able to pick up women (twilight just on sight)

3.spike was probally confused on what was happening when he came in

4.the story is a good story cheers

5.there should parts (more) cheers

for how well that story was i say There should be a PARTY at the bakery (pinkies bakery) to celebrate. (i wish i could do that in real life)
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PostSubject: Re: Crimson: The First Days of Nightmare   Sat Mar 17, 2012 10:44 pm

Working on a new chapter after a long absence from this site.
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